How to write a speech to defend a project. We are preparing a speech for the defense of the WRC (an example of a report). How to write a defense for a thesis

So, the first thing you have to submit for defense is the graduation project itself. Properly executed, signed by you, the head, the reviewer and the head of the department. Next, you need to provide a signed sheet with handouts, a signed supervisor's review, a signed and stamped review from a third party, and often a CD with a copy of the diploma and handouts.

1. The first thing the defense begins with is a standard greeting: “Dear members of the state attestation commission, your attention is invited to the final qualifying work on the topic ...”. If the secretary named the topic of work before you, then you should not repeat it and you can move on to the main thing.
2. It is necessary to start the speech with a description of the relevance of the topic, because in the work, it is the relevance, its elaboration and scientific novelty that are valued. Therefore, be sure to include these points in your speech.
3. After relevance, goals and objectives follow, it is better to put them on a slide and handout. This will save you time and will not let you miss the commission.
4. After mentioning the tasks, there is an object and an object, which are also duplicated on the slide.
5. After that, you should talk about the research done, about the developments, about what you did in the thesis, the results of the research, if they have already been put into practice, then be sure to add photographs, any supporting materials, efficiency calculations to the presentation.

The structure of the main part of speech

Methodology
Its application
Efficiency mark
Recommendations

6. In the conclusion of the speech, you can indicate the practical significance of the work (2-3 lines).
Then say: “Thank you for your attention, the report is over and you are waiting for questions from the commission.”

As for the questions of the members of the attestation commission, believe me, no one except you knows the issues that you raised in your work, so the questions will relate to understanding the material that you went through during training and applied in your final graduation work. Most importantly, when answering a question, think a little, do not go beyond the scope of the question asked, connect your vision, because. members of the commission will evaluate both the content part and your ability as a specialist to answer questions.

Recall that the speech is given 5-7 minutes of time and it is not advisable to exceed it. It is important to defend the work briefly and to the point.

The structure of the speech for the defense of the diploma

Dear Chairman and Members of the State Examination Commission.

Your attention is presented to the graduation project on the topic ....... for the organization ...... .. student full name

The purpose of the graduation project is …….

Achieving the goal can be achieved by implementing the following tasks:

-…………….

The relevance of the topic of the graduation project "Name of the topic."

The research topic is important because the task of its own representation on the Internet is to convey the necessary information to the maximum number of people. This is the efficiency and scale of providing information to a wide range of users.

Object of research - organization's activities …………..

Subject of research - organization website …………………

Research methods: systematic analysis of literature, acquaintance with specialized publications from Internet resources.

In the first chapter of the graduation project was produced ……………….

After the analysis of all existing means, it was decided to choose the means for the implementation of the graduation project …..

Tell about the content of the work (second chapter)

Conclusions, conclusion

An example of a finished speech for the defense of a diploma in GMU

Dear chairman and members of the attestation commission!

Relevance our graduation project is due to the fact that in modern conditions the improvement personnel policy in local governments is a powerful reserve for improving the efficiency of activities. Also, attestation is a significant personnel technology, with the help of which it is possible to assess the level of professional and qualified training of municipal employees.

aim graduation project is the development of a program to improve the certification of municipal employees in the administration of the Berezovsky urban district. Tasks, object and subject of research are presented on slide 3.4.

In the first chapter "Features of certification of municipal employees: theoretical aspects» We consider the concept of attestation from different points of view. Some concepts of certification are given on slide 6. Here we are studying the legal documents that regulate the certification of municipal employees (slide 7).

Analyzing various concepts and legal documents, we come to the conclusion that certification as a system includes such elements as objects and subjects of certification (slide 8). Also in the first chapter, certification is considered by us as a kind of management process that includes various procedures or activities. They are indicated on slide 9. Then, in the first chapter, we look at the subjects of assessment, procedures and assessment tools that can be seen on slides 10,11,12.

An analysis of the theoretical literature and regulatory documents allows us to conclude that attestation is a process for the successful completion of which various procedures are carried out. We list them: this is the formation of an attestation commission; further is the approval of the certification schedule. This also includes the compilation of lists of municipal employees subject to certification; preparation of documents necessary for the work of the attestation commission. Also, during the certification process, various items or aspects of assessment, for example, assessment of the level of prof. knowledge, skills, abilities, the degree of achievement of results in the activities of an employee in accordance with the position held. The attestation procedure also includes the approval by the members of the commission of a decision on which assessment tools will be used. Finally, as a separate process, one can single out the summing up of the assessment results, as a result of which the objects and subjects of certification can receive objective information and a high degree satisfaction.

In the second chapter, which is called "The specifics of attestation in the administration of the Berezovsky urban district," we study general characteristics activities and structure of the administration of the Berezovsky city district, which can be seen on slide 14. Here, in the second chapter, we analyze the activities of the personnel service of the administration of the Berezovsky city district, as well as the staffing of municipal employees who underwent certification in 2011 (slide 15). In the course of it, the results of the professional performance of municipal employees were evaluated on the basis of determining the employee's compliance with the qualification requirements for the position he is filling, the complexity of the work performed, as well as assessing its effectiveness and efficiency. On the next slide, you can see what assessment tools were actually used by the attestation commission of the Berezovsky city district. In our opinion, this is about 50% of what could be used. Then here we identify problems in achieving the effectiveness of the certification of municipal employees, and also determine ways to solve them. This material is on slide 17.

Thus, the analysis of the empirical material allows us to draw the following conclusion: the certification of municipal employees in the administration of the Berezovsky urban district is, at first glance, effective. In the assessment process, all subjects or aspects of the assessment are used. But, unfortunately, not all assessment tools are used in this case. Consequently, members of the commission do not have complete objective information on the assessment of the performance of an employee. Accordingly, the final materials characterizing the assessment of the performance of the assessed employee are also incomplete.

The third chapter is called "Draft Program for Improving the Certification of Municipal Employees of the Administration of the Berezovsky City District" we present the program, its goal is to increase the competence of the certification organizers. The goals and objectives of the program are presented on slide 19.

We propose to introduce methodological recommendations for the advisory assistance to members of the certification commission of the administration of the Berezovsky city district for the effective conduct of certification. In our opinion, such recommendations will help managers and members of the certification committee to better understand the meaning of certification, make a well-thought-out management decision on the use of specific assessment tools, and also explain all the requirements and procedures to those who are certified. An exemplary structure of the guidelines is presented on slide 20. In guidelines developed by us, the general evaluation criteria are indicated (slide 21,22). Further, in measures to improve certification, we consider it possible to include such a section as a plan for the personal professional development of a municipal employee for a year. An analysis of the implementation of such a plan will help managers and members of the attestation commission to obtain reliable information about the need to send an employee to advanced training courses or prof. retraining.

It can be concluded that as a result of the implementation of proposals to improve the certification of municipal employees, we achieve the integrity of the certification system, that is, various certification processes and procedures create a single complex that can function stably. The social results of the implementation of the program for improving the certification of municipal employees are presented by us on slide 23.

Final conclusions. In order for certification not to be formal, it is necessary to introduce innovative technologies, motivate and inform the administration staff, this will make it possible to objectively evaluate the activities of municipal employees.

The proposed certification program will give an effective impetus if recommendations for his practical activities for a certain period, and in the next attestation, their implementation is analyzed, characterizing the degree to which a municipal employee achieves specific goals.

When you have a finished thesis on hand, it's half the battle. Why? Because the text of your diploma was read only by your supervisor, well, maybe even the head. department. And he is not known to the commission. The grade for the diploma will be based on what and how you will pronounce while standing at the pulpit, i.e. from the text of the defense and the way it is presented.

Components of a successful defense

1. Well-written defense text (speech)
2. Good review by the supervisor
3. Good external review
4. Confidence in information.

"What" to say depends on the text of your work. But there are general guidelines.

1) The speech begins with the words " Dear Chairman! Dear members of the State Attestation Commission! Your attention is presented to the final qualification work on the topic: ... ..
2) Further, the speech is written according to the following scenario:
in the works of …………… others
So, the object of research is……….
The subject of the research is ……………..
The purpose of the study is to ………
To achieve this goal, the following tasks are formulated:
Solving the tasks set using ...... methods: system-structural, concrete-sociological, technical-legal, linguistic, comparative, formal-legal determined the results of the study:

In the field of theory,…………
In the field of practice, …………
In the field of legal regulation …………

You don't need to rewrite the text. In 5-7 minutes, you still won’t say anything important, and no one needs fragments of text.
Standard scheme:

• Relevance (why did you come up with this topic)
• How the theme was developed
• Subject, object (i.e. what we went out to explore)
• Goal (with what common goal did we come out and tasks, i.e. how do we achieve our goal)
• What methods did we use to obtain the results of the study
• What results have we achieved
• What conclusions does this lead us to?
• What provisions do we defend in this regard?

Specific example.

Dear Chairman! Dear members of the State Attestation Commission!
Your attention is presented to the final qualifying work on the topic: state registration of rights to real estate and transactions with it.
The relevance of the study is due to the fact that it is real estate that forms the central link of the entire system of market relations. Real estate is not only the most important commodity that satisfies a variety of personal needs of people, but at the same time capital in real form, generating income. Pay attention to great importance objects of real estate in the life and activity of citizens and legal entities, as well as in civil circulation, the law fixed its special legal regime: transactions with real estate are subject to state registration.
The relevance of the research topic and its theoretical development in the works of Alekseev V.A., Kirsanov A.R., Dmitriev A.V., Ilchenko A.L., Kozlova I.V., Kozyr O.M., Tkach A.N., Lomidze O.G., Skvortsova O.Yu., Syrodoeva N.A., Suchkova N.V. and others allowed to determine the object, subject, purpose and objectives of the study.
Thus, the object of research is the totality of public relations in the field of state registration of real estate transactions.
The subject of the study is the institution of state registration of real estate transactions.
The purpose of the study is to comprehensively analyze the features of state registration of transactions with real estate, identify problems in the legal regulation of this institution and formulate ways to eliminate them.
To achieve this goal, the following tasks are formulated:

• reveal the history of the formation and development of the institution of real estate transactions;
• name the main sources of legal regulation of real estate transactions at the present time;
• characterize real estate as a special object of legal regulation; give a concept and name the types of real estate transactions;
• to reveal the concept of state registration of real estate transactions;
• analyze the procedure for state registration;
• identify the problems of legal regulation of state registration of real estate transactions and suggest ways to solve them.

Solving the tasks set using general scientific methods of cognition and private scientific methods based on it: system-structural, concrete sociological, technical-legal, linguistic, comparative, formal-legal determined the results of the study:

1. disclose the legal regulation of state registration of real estate transactions
2. explore the mechanism of legal regulation of state registration of real estate transactions
3. identify problems of legal regulation of state registration of real estate transactions.

The presented results of the study allowed us to formulate the following conclusions:
In the field of theory create a unified concept of legal regulation of state registration of real estate transactions; develop a methodology for teaching the stated topic in school curriculum; to develop a lesson-game on the state registration of real estate transactions.
In the area of ​​practice summarize the materials of federal and regional judicial practice.
In the field of legal regulation identify the main problems in the field of legal regulation of state registration of real estate transactions and formulate specific ways to eliminate them.
Based on the results of the study and the formulated conclusions, we submit the following proposals for defense:
The study identified the following issues:

1. The legislation does not provide for a reduction in fees in the event of registration of the rights of one object to the objects included in the property complex on the basis of one title document.
2. The turnover of real estate is currently regulated by a large number of regulatory legal acts, the application of which is hampered by their contradictions to each other, the imperfection of the wording.

Based on the above, in order to further improve the legislation, it is proposed:
1. Introducing amendments to the legal acts regulating the amount of the fee for state registration in order to reduce the fee in case of registration of the rights of one object to the objects included in the property complex on the basis of one document of title.
At present, Art. 11 of the Federal Law “On state registration of rights to real estate and transactions with it” (payments for state registration of rights) refers to Art. 333.33 of the Tax Code of the Russian Federation. In p.p. 20, paragraph 1, the amount of the state fee for state registration of rights, restrictions (encumbrances) of rights to real estate, contracts for the alienation of real estate, is established for individuals - 500 rubles; organizations - 7,500 rubles.
We believe that in some cases, for example, when registering the rights of one object to the objects included in the property complex on the basis of one title document, the amount of the fee can be reduced to 200 rubles for individuals and 3,000 rubles. organizations.
This norm should be indicated in the Tax Code of the Russian Federation (Article 333.33, paragraph 20) and in Art. 11 of the Federal Law "On state registration of rights to real estate and transactions with it." Yes, Art. 11 of the Federal Law "On state registration of rights to real estate and transactions with it" may look like this:

1. For state registration of rights in accordance with tax legislation, a state fee is charged.
2. The amount of the state duty for state registration of rights, restrictions (encumbrances) of rights to real estate, contracts for the alienation of real estate, is set for individuals - 500 rubles; organizations - 7,500 rubles.
   In cases of registration of the rights of one object to the objects included in the property complex on the basis of one title document, the amount of the fee may be 200 rubles. for individuals and 3.000 for organizations.….”

2. In order to improve the legal regulation of relations related to real estate it is necessary to carry out work on the codification and improvement of civil legislation, to develop a concept for the development of legislation on real estate and its registration.
In the 3rd chapter, the methodological aspect of studying the topic "State registration of rights to real estate and transactions with it" is developed. The main forms of legal education for students are: lectures on legal topics; legal conversations; discussion of books and articles. An important role is also played by independent study of legal literature and active participation in the organization and conduct of activities for the legal education of schoolchildren. It is advisable to include work with legal documents in law lessons at school. This contributes to the practical consolidation of the theoretical legal knowledge gained. One of the most effective active methods of teaching law at school are game methods. The game methodology of legal education is also relevant in high school. In the process of preparing and conducting a business game by law, each participant should have the opportunity for self-affirmation and self-development. Such a form of work as an organizational and business game is usually built on the principle of modeling various situations. The purpose of the organizational and business game is to develop the most effective solutions for the school law course.
The development of the lesson-game "Registering the right to real estate" is given. The purpose of the lesson is to form students' understanding of the legal basis for the procedure for registering the right to real estate.
Thank you for attention! I will be glad to answer your questions.

Thank you for your attention.

Now part 2. HOW to speak? How to present yourself so that you are singled out?

Well, let's start with the elimination method. Like most do: they came out with a piece of paper boo-boo-boo-boo-boo. Instead of 5 minutes, 7 or even 10... Do you like the commission? No, monotony.
You left ... without a leaflet and a crib. You have everything in your head. Smile from ear to ear, holiday! And they began (a voice like in a wedding palace ... Dear Chairman (looked into the eyes - smiled), dear members of the commission (looked into the eyes - smiled) let me introduce you ... .. everything gently, clearly, loudly, confidently. That is, that YOU presented YOUR work to them is great, both they and you need it ... Keep their attention. We talk and always look at the commission. 1) it's nice (when not on the floor, but on them) 2) you will be remembered.
Play with intonation... You see that you are distracted: highlight the fragment with a raised tone, it is important to keep your attention.
Your speech should be 1 minute LESS than the minimum... Less... Believe me, the commission gets tired of listening to bububa for 8-10 minutes day after day... Your speech should be 4 minutes, but WHAT!!! If you defend yourself in the last rows, you will be incredibly grateful for the time saved, and they will save yours in return by asking fewer questions.
Don't be afraid of questions. There are 2 rules

1. The main thing is to answer right away. Confident, loud, joyful. You did nothing but wait for this question!!
2. If you don't know how to answer, see rule 1.!!

The commission does not know all the subtleties of your topic. And your confident tone will not leave them in doubt about your veracity!

The report for the defense of the WRC is important for the evaluation of the graduation project. The average volume of a graduate's final research is 70 pages, but the student's time will be limited when speaking. That is why it is worth preparing a speech for members of the state commission in advance.

Report for the defense of the WRC

Order a report for the defense of the WRC report for thesis is a pre-prepared text for a defense speech. It serves as a hint for the student and contains all the main theses of his WRC. An incorrectly composed speech can cause the failure of even the best work, since the success of the defense depends on the quality of the speech.

How to write a defense report

Before preparing a report, the student should re-read the text of the WRC and highlight the most important points. At this stage, it is not necessary to pay attention to their volume and interrelation, the main thing is to determine the most fundamental theses of the diploma. After that, it is required to combine all the selected fragments into a single, logically connected text and once again review what was written.

Important! A properly drafted defense report always contains a connected transition from one thought to another.

You should also pay attention to the level of education of the audience. There is no need for professors of the disciplines in which the WRC was written to explain the meaning of special terms and concepts in the report. A detailed disclosure of terminology will be required if the commission will include specialists from related departments or the chosen topic of the diploma will have a narrow specificity.

Report Structure

A correctly drafted report on the defense of the final qualification work consists of the following parts:

1. It is advisable to start a speech on the defense of the WRC with introductory remarks. Next, the relevance of the study should be highlighted. Describe it briefly (2-3 sentences).
2. Next comes short description the object and subject of research, the goals of the WRC and the means of achieving them.
3. The main section of the speech is a description of the conclusions of the graduation project. It is recommended to cover the results of each chapter separately.
4. Presentation of the practical substantiation of the conclusions of the WRC. You can also give suggestions for improving the subject being studied.

Important! The speech ends with an appeal to the chairman and members of the state attestation commission with gratitude for their attention.

Sample report plan for the WRC

The WRC report plan always consists of several main points:

• introduction from the introduction of the thesis, designation of the topic and relevance of the WRC;
• description of the structure of the work - includes brief information about the structure of the WRC, the number of chapters;
• theoretical part (definition of sources used in the course of work, research methods, analysis modern design topic issues);
• practical part with forecasts and expectations from the work done;
• summing up the results of the study (the conclusions may partially duplicate the conclusion of the thesis)

The structure of the defense speech may vary depending on the specifics of the thesis topic, but the report plan should remain unchanged.

Defense Speech Sample

Dear Chairman and members of the State Attestation Commission!
Your attention is presented to the thesis on the topic: ...
The topic chosen is particularly relevant, as modern science …
object scientific research in this work is...

As part of the thesis, the following goals and objectives are formulated: ...

Sources used...

The first chapter covered the basics...

The second chapter analyzes...

The third chapter describes...

In this way, practical implications research allows...